Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Darkness Comments

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When daylight goes down
and darkness descends upon the town,
a cold chill sends shivers down your spine.
You're all alone on a darkened street
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Alesia Leach
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Jessica Nichols 21 July 2018

Creepy! But well-written. You're very good.

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Trinity Baldwin 21 July 2018

If you weren't so accomplished this slice of horror would not work. The rhythm is spot on, never faltering.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 October 2015

Verily, a horrific depiction of darkness in bitter cold

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