All pits of life have gone by.
Your soul is the only thing that
will not die.
Beneath ground are these black caves
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your poem is full of powerful words... life words, words from your heart. it makes the poem wonderful in its sad meaning... it puts on the massage for all people... I like it. thanks
Amazing! What a powerful and thought provoking write that clearly shows your wisdom and poetic talent! The truth breathes through this well penned and fine texture write! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! I hope when time permits, you can read my latest poem posted titled: 'A Spirit Uncloaked' and enjoy! Romeo from New York City! ...
This is very true and honest work. You have a way with the words.... and the uses of imagery is perfectly gelling with the theme. A good work indeed.
So wunderfull narreted................