Darkness Comments

An insightful rendition on lose of sunshine in a life at its lowest ebb, well articulated and nicely brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme. A witty creation set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing Zhyne.

Dear Zhyne, such a great poem...10++++

sad to say that people think that they want to end their life, But the only thing they want is to live their life. Experience of darkness, dejection, depression and the sense of meaninglessness......... then living is the way for joy . if we live we can help so many others who are in need of us. thank u dear poet. tony