Monday, October 24, 2016

Darkness Comments

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A dark vast emptiness,
It is scareful, all alone.
Wandering, don't know where you're stepping,
Your foot takes a step, don't know whether good or bad.
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Jaclyn Payne
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Brad Brandon 24 October 2016

This poem, although dark makes me feel as though someone knows what I'm going through to ask extent like whatever step i take I don't know if it's good or bad. I feel lost, alone, and cold. There's someone I love whom was torn from my arms about three years ago. Ever since she was gone so was a part of me. She lives quite a distance away and finding her again is the hardest thing I've ever done. I visited her a few weeks ago and we were only able to look in each other's eyes for about a second.

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Jaclyn Payne 26 October 2016

That's so sad. But yeah, this poem was about losing somebody to due an incident and you can't live without them and they were kinds like your guide and you don't know what to do without them.

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