Monday, March 18, 2013

Darkness Comments

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I am Caught in a void
of swirling darkness
It consumes everything around me
Unable to see, I blindly
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Scarlett Voight
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Egal Bohen 15 December 2014

Scarlett, Life is full of light and darkness. I think it was Francis Bacon who said 'Without the dark you cannot see a shining light' (or something similar!) . A gripping poem and well written so I'm sure it got you some good marks. Thank you very much for your kind comments on my poem 'Questions' If you find the answers please let me kno53225w! Sincerely Egal..

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Tammie Aimson 18 March 2013

You might have been depressed but its very good. i like it! xx tammie

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