Darkness Comments

The part about even shadows dying means so much, it's really quite impressive. Very powerful without being forceful. Cheers -M

Darkness! Even my shadows have died, swallows up my soul, creating such a huge hole, I really appreciate these verses.Well done.Go on! ! ! !

well this was also my first attempt at doing a rhyming poem too so i think it hasnt turned out to bad but thankyou for all of your kind words.

Outburst of the heart vividly painted in this well crafted and poignant write that clearly shows your Beauty and Talent! There is always light at the end of tunnel and also there is a golden sunshine day waiting for you! 10+++ Thank you my dear Charlie for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

but i think this is great. the light will destroy the whole darkness in the universe. a nice penning well done.

but i think this is great. the light will destroy the whole darkness in the universe. a nice penning well done.