Saturday, August 20, 2011

Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

As i sit and wait in darkness
i focus on whats come you see.
words she says cut with sharpness
now pain from depression i bleed.
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joseph juarez
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 September 2011

I have a poem entitled DARKNESS too. And you see your poem is very symbolic it tells a sad story but it is good that you write poems as a diversion darkness will be your friend too try finding out how. I enjoyed your poem nice.

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Romeo Della Valle 21 August 2011

Bravo! Joseph, my friend! A beautiful and well penned poem that really moves me since I have been there many times and I know the feeling! I am still feeling the effects of departure a few years ago. As a matter of fact, I wrote the last one and posted today, titled: SUDDENLY...For this masterpiece, I gave a well deserved 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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