Saturday, March 5, 2011

Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.9

Darkness is a quiet friend
That embraces me so tight
When doubts I cannot end
It helps me feel alright
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Marvin Brato 06 November 2013

Darkness is a camouflage to cover innate thoughts and feelings.... it assimilate sentiments which actually lighten up the burden!

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

many emotions can be hid in the darkness. Its the light of day that gets us sometimes. good write

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Mohabeer Beeharry 25 August 2013

This poem is so full of messages. Darkness or forced loneliness may not be a cure. But they give you time to rejuvenate, a certain chance to reassess. I like the writing. Well done. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Arabella Picken 10 August 2013

This is Brilliant. Love it

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Deepak Sawhney 04 August 2013

Very beautifully expressed.

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This poem is really excellent naida! ! v definite 10

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Alon Dy 10 September 2012

This is a wonderful poem! good work kabayan!

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Autumn Winds 26 April 2012

I happen to love this poem. Darkness and oblivion helps me forget the sturggles and pains in my life. Reality is harsh and it's nice to escape.

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Diana Rose Tolentino 03 October 2011

In darkness you can hide, hide you from the world and others' sight But it cannot hide you from yourself. And it is youself that you have to face. Well..i can't help but answer back. Your poem inspires me. Yes, darkness is a friend when it suits you. It helps you redeem and pick yourself up, without having the eyes of the world that expects you to fall again. But beware, you can get lost in the darkness. So when you are brave enough again..step into the light my friend. Ahhh...I feel so good. Thanks again for another great poem.

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Joseph Juarez 04 September 2011

this is a great poem i thought about it darkness is a great friend it can hide me from the world but you cant rely or hide in darkness forever. sometimes you need light to guide you

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i love your poem its very good i loved it a lot i some times fill like the drakness is the only one that knows my pain and me but i loved your poem

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Jim Troy 10 August 2011

Naida, you bring forward an aspect of darkness that I never did give credit to. Your descriptive words of faithful, brave, quiet friend. A wonderful tribute to a part of our lives that gets a bad rap most of the time.. I love the bold way you bring it forward.......... Thanks for the lesson......... Very good .................. Jim Troy

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 July 2011

if you take it positively darkness is a friend of ours as we get all the peace there.nice ink.

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Rafiq Sandeelvi 03 July 2011

Night is a part of our mind and soul, I also like darkness because I feel peace and harmony in its domain and it can expose me better than day light.you have captured the power of darkness and named it comrade, your faithful ally who helps to remove your hidden pain....in the symbolic way your darkness reaches till ultimate darkness..nice poem with touching atmosphere.... kindly read my all poems and leave your analytic remarks in detail.

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Eric Cockrell 18 June 2011

in darkness we find the peace beyond ourselves... love it!

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Khaleelulla Syed 10 May 2011

Indeed darkness provides that support and strength to us which no one can provide. great thinking good continue.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 March 2011

Good observation. When light of hope fades away, darkness works like a balm. It provides us more power to struggle. Very poignant write indeed. Thanks for sharing... Please read my poem 'My ultimate companion.'

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A beautiful poem, honest and heart-touching. Darkness yes is a quiet friend but do you not often find that darkness can hide you away from the world? I often like to go walking in the dark along country roads where nothing can be heard and where fears fly away....as you so succinctly put in your poem.... darkness can be a bringer of loneliness but one is comforted by the dark ink-blanket! ! ! thank you Naida... your friend, Ruth Lavelle

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Vinod Kumar 15 March 2011

Yes Darkness is really a best friend it gives to us a great beautiful other world, nice work,10+

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Cristina Teodor 12 March 2011

The light is the battlefield of all human beings, of their joy and sorrows. The fall of darkness bring that peace and 'quiet' so vital to heal the wounds of mind. You show us that the 'embrace' of darkness help to 'hide the pain'.Nice poem..Cristina Teodor

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

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bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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