Friday, June 7, 2013

Darkness Comments

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I stay in my bed
Afraid of light
Afraid of the dark
I am weighted down by my kind
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Jake whaley
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Mike Barrett 23 January 2014

Jake, like it or not, we as Soul, are in the driver's seat of our life, the choices we make to a large extent determine the lessons before us. One of my poems, On Pain, touches on the subject of pain...I wrote it in my teens and it was one of my first few poems. I prefer serving in the light and beauty of the IT IS, less painful, more fun! Cheers!

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Payal Lalwani 07 June 2013

kIND OF SAD.It touches a chord.Thank you for sharing.

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