Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

You see the darkness in his eyes
seeking for your dimise
the darkness is surrounding
your heart is pounding
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Styles Diesel
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Marieta Maglas 10 March 2010

he keeps you from sailing that ship. nice reflective poem, be blessed. 10 Mari

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Gwendalynn Ash 09 March 2010

This is a great poem.I like the rhyming.I wish it was longer!

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Adam Reed 09 March 2010

i really like the rhymes. very nice :)

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