Sunday, July 26, 2009

Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.6

the stars dissapear from the sky
and dissapear my desire to try
and my dreams have levelled in the darkness
wich im surrounded by
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lola hi l
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Hribhu Dey 06 June 2011

Loved reading the piece....great dear!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 July 2009

Darkness isn't all is bad, through it we could have a peace of mind.Nice writes Lola.

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Luwi Habte 27 July 2009

Lola this is so nice and nice ideas as well love it Luwi

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Ency Bearis 26 July 2009

well expressed poem...meaningful...

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