Only darkness that my eyes could see,
Only darkness that my hands could feel,
And in the darkness,
I stood alone,
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a simile write to solitude and well presented...a brilliant poem.....10
Could there be any light at the end of this darkness? Could there be found any hope lies beyond this darkness? Or could there be any life in this damp darkness? .............yea at the end of tunnel of darkness...........there is sky fill with delight.........a good write..........
Darkness is the end to everything...relations or life...and it is the beginning too! getting revived as light... good work Lily...soul searching words...well expressed...10