Darkness Comments

wow, that was a really powerful poem.

a poem of beauty and darkness mixed together perfectly. creatively, darkly and emotionally beautiful!

Again you write it from where you feel it Brook you have the protential to become a great writer I hope you reach that protential.10 again

As you shed tears of blood This steady rain That is beautifully depressing

Misery is the key to a better life.Trust me! Nice writes Brooke. Brett.