Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.6

Covered by darkness
There is no escape
All because of one little mistake
They show no love
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Brooke Ashlyn
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Anna Wilson 29 July 2010

wow, that was a really powerful poem.

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Kieran J96 29 July 2010

a poem of beauty and darkness mixed together perfectly. creatively, darkly and emotionally beautiful!

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Patrick A. Martin 31 August 2009

Again you write it from where you feel it Brook you have the protential to become a great writer I hope you reach that protential.10 again

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Dylan Oppedahl 14 July 2009

As you shed tears of blood This steady rain That is beautifully depressing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 July 2009

Misery is the key to a better life.Trust me! Nice writes Brooke. Brett.

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