Sunday, April 5, 2009

Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tears of black rundown my face
i dont know what to say
as i am silenced by the thoughts in my head
i dont know how to deal with this anymore
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Sadie Vanity
COMMENTS

ah....preety good... enjoyable to read mainly because its obvious that theses are true thoughts/emotions. nice.

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Christine Kerr 05 April 2009

A sad and emotional poem, Writing about our feelings is a tremendous lift for our ego. Nothing ventured nothing gained. Hopefully the writing will take away the pain 10+++

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MuSiC HeaD 05 April 2009

love n peace to you girl xx very heartfelt piece of writing. keep ur head up

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