Saturday, March 7, 2009

Darkness Comments

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I'm swimming all alone in a pool of darkness
and I feel like darkness is slowly pulling me under
I yell for help but no one is there to hear it
I begin to see the water at eye level
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Hadyn Rodriguez
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Keith Hendrickson 21 July 2009

ive read about 6 of your poems so far and this 1 is my favorite. when i read the other comments 1 word keeps popping up 'intense' and that word is spot on. very nice work. another masterpiece of yours.

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Mr. Prince (g.g.) 07 March 2009

i like it but i cant tell exactly what darkeness is is he a guy?

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Hadyn Rodriguez

Hadyn Rodriguez

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