Darkness Comments

lol i like very dark, but alot of description..noice

Short but substantive. Keep shining.

Your comin out from a tunnel without being able to see the daylight...........you could be in another world dear.Nice writes indeed.

This has something, darkpuppet: it's understated, with just enough given so we can feel with you, and want to stand with you, but not so much detail (on what your particular darkness is) that outsiders can't relate to it. Many folk on this site could learn from the way you've crafted this one. Well done!