Darkness Comments

I really, really love the Luc Bat and I still think you did an exceptional job with it. It's amazing how the more you read it the easier it flows. The two rhymes that threw me last time didn't throw me at all these last few times I read it. Note* I read it a few times for the enjoyment of it, not because I couldn't understand it...just wanted to let you know that :) Anyhow, don't be too hard on yourself because you are an excellent poet. Peace and happiness. Oh, I very much enjoyed your partenza represa too.