Thursday, July 10, 2008

Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a corner I cower in fear,
sitting with my head between my knees,
my arms tightly wrapped over me,
as the shadows creep in, watching me.
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Javier Falcon
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Alexandra Gray 03 December 2008

oh wow..one of the most awesome poems i've ever read..instant fave!

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Al Ramos 22 July 2008

Pretty deep, if you believe in ghost.

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your title is very strong, i agree with the one below me, someone in the light will love you. very good write.

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Marvin Brato 10 July 2008

Very good expression of your feelings.... being Egoistic (pardon me) ! Maybe to overcome you fear you may start getting... far far away from darkness instead from light! Then you will find that you are not alone, that somebody else out there in the light is loving you! A 10.

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
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