Thursday, November 5, 2009

Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness brings, bloodless pain
inner demons, shrouded shame,
scale the walls inside my head,
Pile the bodies of the dead.
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Katie E 29 November 2009

A very well written poem. =]

1 0 Reply
Chitra - 16 November 2009

the inner turmoil and its effects..well depicted through these verses!

1 0 Reply
Joe Corbett

Joe Corbett

Watertown, NewYork
Close
Error Success