Thursday, May 15, 2008

Darkness Comments

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My life is but a black hole
Very dark
Yet I keep getting sucked into it
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Natasha Smeltser
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Glaedr the poet 13 June 2008

Also wanted to say I really like the message conveyed in this poem. I have a couple with good Christian messages as well: 'Inspiration from my Prayers' and 'Unstoppable' Enjoy

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Glaedr the poet 11 June 2008

That's pretty awesome, after all, not all good poetry has to rhyme.

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Brandon Dugan 15 May 2008

cool poem i liked it very nice

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Natasha Smeltser

Natasha Smeltser

Waterloo, Iowa
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