Monday, March 24, 2008

Darkness Comments

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Tonight,
darkness enveloped
my whole existence.
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Wali Jamali
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Seema Chowdhury 13 November 2009

wali this poem is full of pain and hurt that is oozing out of every word you have used. may God Almighty take away and sooths your pain and give you peace of mind and soul. Ameen take care and pray, for prayers is a wonderful weapon.

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Ejaz Khan 06 November 2009

A beautiful write so close and yet so far, not easy to comprehend regardless of how far from truth one is, to see it a light is needed!

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Sebastine Humaemo 14 January 2009

waa deeply touched.....short lines with hidden myths..........sebastine

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Sarah Sisson 14 January 2009

I feel that way sometimes....great write!

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Julian Salvacion 09 November 2008

simple and yet it conveys an intricate emotion. loved it!

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Aijaz Asif 19 September 2008

darkness is my sweet friend...an excellent poem showing the deep thoughts and inner feelings...thanks

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Reshma Ramesh 19 September 2008

short and neat.......loved it

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Manonton Dalan 28 August 2008

in darkness i bestow my sadness and in the light i hide my loneliness. awesome poem. thank you very much

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Omar Ali Sabar 14 August 2008

darkness can overhaul any glimour of light... nice poem

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Chitra - 13 August 2008

talks about that one dark corner in the inner cloister but hy remember that the rest of the inner abode is rich in hope which will help you cope

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Seema Chowdhury 25 March 2008

nice poem but at this age don't feel so low and frustrated. life is too hard and bitter. look forward with faith and hope. good luck and keep writing.

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Aasiq the poet 25 March 2008

a well-said poem. cheer up zoobi, no world is perfect, least of all the world of misery. somewhere, some how light of hope will peep in. all the same a lot of promise with in you.

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Well captured, but still has a soupcon of mystery

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Simplistically thunderous, talks about simmering fear, anxiety and other negativities in cauldron of life Regards, rehan

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