Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

A formless mass cloaked in darkness
being created by God
Originally covered the earth
Separated from light
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Kayode Ogunleye
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Leah Ayliffe 09 February 2015

Beautiful and dark. Love it!

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surely sinful deeds are deeds of darkness the poet found the truth and revealed to others in this poem and perfectly beautiful and meaningful and likes it.

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Olumide Ayodele 08 September 2008

quite simple, but definitely heavy.nice verse.

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Vanessa Svaleson 02 May 2008

i like it. give you a differnt thinking on darkness shorty

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Riquetta Elliott 16 April 2008

Darkness is all around us. Very good poem.

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Michael Campbell 07 April 2008

great poem. i agree with Sara, my favorite line is the last one also. keep it up.

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perfect everglade 28 March 2008

i really like this poem :) my favorite line is the last one. its true. this poem gives me a clear vision of what you are saying. :) Sara<3

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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 15 March 2008

i like the ending...perfect...'coz heaven has no night'...

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