Friday, December 5, 2008

Darkness Comments

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I'm swimming all alone in a pool of darkness
and I feel like darkness is slowly pulling me under
I yell for help but no one is there to hear it
I begin to see the water at eye level
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Angel Smith
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Keith Hendrickson 07 January 2009

very nice. dark and deep poem. i loved it

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Luzaan De Bruyn 16 December 2008

A VERY DEEP POEM! ! YOU PAINT ME A PICTURE WITH YOUR WORDS AND ITS LIKE IM THERE WITH YOU.. FIGHTING THE DARKNESS.. MOST YOUNG PEOPLE FEEL LIKE THIS AND IF WE DONT FIGHT IT AND HELP THEM GET OUT THEN WE ARE JUST ANOTHER GIRL OR BOY.. I THINK THIS POEM CAN HELP PEOPLE.. IM SURE IT ALREADY DID

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Angel Smith

Angel Smith

Florence, Ky
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