Wednesday, August 13, 2014

Darkling Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.9

What moves behind those darkling eyes
What memories concealed -
What shadows drift within their gaze
What visions unrevealed
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Valerie Dohren
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Shaun Cronick 27 December 2019

A wonderfully written and beautiful poem Valerie. What more is there to say that hasn't been said already. Thank you so much.

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Perry Biggerstaff 24 November 2014

Love it! ! ! ! ! ! The best thing about taking a break from this board, is coming back and finding new and wonderful works.

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Hans Vr 25 September 2014

I agree Val, with most of the comments below. This is a wonderful poem. For many, the words do not come out anymore, but thoughts shine through their eyes. You state it so beautifully, our feelings appear on our face. Even if we cannot share the stories, the memories, they are still so much alive. I am so sure that the person feels it very much if someone notices his or her inside stories and it makes them truly happy. The person noticing must a person with the warmest of empathy herself. I love this poem.

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Amitava Sur 15 September 2014

A lovely poem, enjoying it's rhythm throughout, yes eyes are the index of the mind and person. Behind those darkling eyes you are imagining the sweet or eventual memories.

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Pat Rivenburg 11 September 2014

I like your style of writing on this poem. It grabs the attenti0on of the reader.

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Kelvin Owusu 10 September 2014

Beautiful as always, always a joy reading your work

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 September 2014

eyes are most beautiful precious thing that we have given Whole nature is the slave of these eyes only..

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David Harris 01 September 2014

A very beautiful poem. Oozes empathy, amazingly well written.

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Dee Corpolongo 31 August 2014

Such a deep and beautiful (as always) poem written by the best. {{{hugs}}} for you my friend.

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Unwritten Soul 29 August 2014

Valerie, i stop reading you and other poets for long but when i back again now..your poem still the same beauty..never aged by your miracle mind_Soul

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Piyush Dey 26 August 2014

Those darkling eyes says everything, with the flow of the evermore emotions. lovely thought, good write.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 August 2014

Face is index of the mind for one who can capture it. You captured all the moods beautifully. Thank you.

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Ken E Hall 25 August 2014

Very nice to read and I'm sure behind those darkling eyes I'm sure you would find an over flow of love for you...captivating poem...regards

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Abekah Emmanuel 24 August 2014

No one knows what is hidden behind those eyes, sometimes, we can only live in hope but may never see the reality. Emotionally filled.....keep it up!

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Heather Wilkins 21 August 2014

a lovely poem Valerie if we could read behind those eyes. They hold the soul of man

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Om Chawla 21 August 2014

What a captivating lyric, Val. Simply superb

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Eugene Levich 21 August 2014

A thoughtful, calmly stated, gentle, and quite moving avowal of love.

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Lyn Paul 20 August 2014

Really beautiful words Valerie. Your heart has touched us again. Thank you

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Abekah Emmanuel 20 August 2014

Very powerful piece of work.... keep it up!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 August 2014

Valerie, very good write, heart touch hand and thought and mind..10

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