Cold darkness
Haunting night
Wolves howling
Abruptly
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Painted with such feeling, heart and soul! .. Ever so deeply and powerfully moving! .. And the ending, with such light! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...................+++++
Morning shines much brighter- - - - Light has the power to overcome darkness, no matter how dense it is .The poem highlights the power of light.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
Great imagery, Richard. The stiff body suggests permanent death, and yet there is a lively, life-giving promise in the words of the last five lines. There's a real impact delivered by this verse.
The poem has a successful effect inspired by Rajnish Manga. The result of this inspirational quote is a most eerie and haunting poem, but Light always wins in the end, comes the morning that shines always brighter than the night before.....when wolves are howling, makes the night more haunting than other nights, perfect choice of words, Richard, a quote remains a quote, but your choice of words makes it eerie. Absoluteely! A 10+++++++++
Angels sing Breathing life Into life Morning shines Much brighter.the first part of the poem was very dark...... i got afraid. but at the end you come to the light of the dawn. lovely poem. thank u dear poet. tony
A powerful and poignant write. Yet, there is always hope and light will conquer darkness. Great poem wonderfully written.
Wolves are howling at darkest night but light of morning will bring new peaceful sound. An amazing poem is shared.10
Superb poem and I would like to know that song which inspired you.
Nice portrayal of a nightmarish show which has ends on a very positive note. Thanks for the cue having been applied beautifully.
A wonderful poem the theme of which is extracted from another amazing poet! Well penned.........10
A poem that shines a light on a darkened path that most of us have gone down sometime in our life.