Sunday, December 20, 2009

Darkest Hour Comments

Rating: 4.8

Come to me now sweet surrender
Bring peace unto a troubled soul
Lay me down where serenity's is found in silence's embrace
Take me here.... this moment..... pass me not
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COMMENTS
C F 30 April 2019

Good of you to have visited PoemHunter today, otherwise I would have missed your poems entirely. Nice title, Darkest Hour, and very good verse.10+

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, patricia. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ruby Honeytip 20 November 2012

Geez Louise....I've been here....struggling through the Abyss. Very descriptive write. Anyone feeling this way should seek out bliss immediately!

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Marvin Brato 18 May 2012

Life is not perfect, there comes a time when we are down and broken! Well-penned!

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