Friday, March 27, 2009

Darkest Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sunlight fading
Stars shine
Wind whispers
Wolves cry
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Okami Kamikaze
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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

you really too your time hey, well done

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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

you really too your time hey, well done

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Adi Cox 05 July 2009

You really set the scene here. I guess there is always one night darker than all the others. Do you like horror movies? I like this poem.10/10

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Barry A. Lanier 27 March 2009

an evocative mix of short subtle, , , depictions almosy in a haiketic form...ending with a forceful provocative ending, , , 'who are we fooling? '

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