Friday, June 29, 2012

Darkened Garden Comments

Rating: 2.7

Wilted blades streak the lawn
of this cold and empty heart.
Death and vice and love's despair
have come to play their part.
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Mandy Lee
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Valerie Dohren 01 July 2012

Lovely, sad little poem.

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Nicklas Leow 01 July 2012

Every sentence capture the picture of a person who had lost an important person perfectly. ''Death and vice and love's despair '' I like this sentence the most.

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Mandy Lee

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