Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Dark Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wings bright as white
With an angelic smile
That could light up a whole room
A heart so full of love
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Darkangel Flyfree
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(De Va) 29 October 2012

The imagery is heart rendering, you take your reader on a journey from innocence into decadence, the loss of love and happiness...great write..

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Xelam Kan™ 23 October 2012

you hav a gift to encart images plz read my poems if honor lost paradise the bridal of the sky

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Black On Black Arts 02 October 2012

everytime i read your work im more and more impressed you are a very gifted writer continue to fly free dark angel

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Kelly Seale 30 September 2012

Your words bring the darkness up close and personal... yet, there is light behind the blackness in your eyes... I feel your heartbreak... I taste the bitterness that escapes your lips... I know.; -) -Great Ink Darkangel... -Kelly.

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Fredoneth Jonelas 28 September 2012

Really in dark. but the poem brings light. I like it.

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Thoughts Of A Poet 28 September 2012

wow could i use the words that are in this poem, and this is a very good poem i love the wording in the poem it's so good i like it really i do

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Asif Andalib 27 September 2012

Those who turned her bright white wings into dark ones should be punished. Beautiful imagery.

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Dougie Fresh 26 September 2012

Really Really Dark, but Really really GOOD!

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