Dark Waters Yonder Comments

I am honest in my comments, but not overly cruel. If it's mean, I won't comment, but, like I said, I will be honest. Other than the fact that you spelled a couple of words wrong, (everyone does at one point or another,) your poem is beautiful. I agree with what you said in your bio, writing is a great way to just let feelings out, or right a spontaneous poem about fishsticks, who knows! Either way it's a great way to just breathe, and this poem shows that, and makes others want to write also, all in all it's a great poem, and definitely worth commenting on.