Sunday, November 15, 2009

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Dark Was The Night (For Onelia) Comments

Rating: 2.8

The noise
tore the quiet

as if the night
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Onelia Avelar 17 November 2009

I found here again the telltale feather from the 'wings of desire' :) the angel has been here :)

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Onelia Avelar 17 November 2009

...as if the night were made of paper... one can almost hear this noise of the night... it becomes almost palpable - a wonderful comparison, i like all the illuminated details of this dark night

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Ruth Walters 16 November 2009

Beautifully descriptive...love this one. Ruthie

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Patti Masterman 15 November 2009

Wow, sometimes the things we think we see in darkness are more terrifying than those seen by full light of day.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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