Tuesday, August 4, 2009

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Rating: 4.5

darkness has fallen, yet i see a tiny speck of light
it has become a very quiet night, in spite, of whats to be in this ferocious fight
it never fails..evil some how always prevails
as it should
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krissi b'williams
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Eyan Desir 22 September 2009

A bit long but good story good write 10s

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kgnti dkritjgmdlo 08 August 2009

You write very well.I like thee archaic tone by which you resound in writ.

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Putholi Arumugham 08 August 2009

so long this poem, just flowing like a stream of consciousness not failing to take the reader along with it good one

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