Dark Thoughts Comments

Sometimes weariness sets in/ Like molten lead into our brain/ Sending out smoke and heat/ Like an overheated pan / Even the drops of consoling words / Instantly evaporate with a hiss / Causing scalding and burning! /.....so touching and true. The real thoughts are well executed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

Darkness can overcome us at times, when it controls us seeping into every crevice of our mind, making war with our emotions. We reach out to our dearest ones for support and help to overcome this shadow world! Brilliant, insightful write!

Thoughtful and introspective. Warding off those dark thoughts is a tough as well as rewarding fight. All of us can relate to it.

Life does not always flow smooth. Nice write.

Pollution need to be controlled in India, Superb mam

Tangled with nettles and brambles! With the muse of the troubles of life. Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A thoughtful poem, it happens with all of us. Even the drops of consoling words Instantly evaporate with a hiss Causing scalding and burning!

No comfort here sadness but that is how we feel sometimes especially at this time with such horror in the world the sun will come through though well I hope it does Loved this poem.

Attitude has an impact on perception. Thanks, Valsa

Dark thoughts constricts and suffocates and as you have rightly noted even consoling words sometimes fail to impress. A beautiful write.

Dark thoughts are inevitable. It is nice to know that it is a common occurrence. They will evaporate eventually and we then get into a normal routine. We need to search for ways to get out of such a condition as soon as possible. The problem is beautifully put in the poem.

yes, sometimes dark thoughts surround us and we dont find any way to get out of it, even then some beautiful things are there in this world that bind us and give us inspiration to live in this world, you have nicely painted your feelings with nice images, thanks, you write well, i enjoy reading your poem,

So very true... sometimes, our thoughts seem to be our master, yet being aware of them; we can inverse the roles and become their master. A thoughtful write!

Since there is an equal and opposite reaction to every action as proved by science and every night is followed by a new and refreshing dawn, dark thoughts occupying one's mind at some time will have to make an exit for giving room to the joyful bright thoughts. There is no space for pessimism in a vibrant mind. Thanks.