Tuesday, July 14, 2015

Dark Tears Comments

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It's hard to cry the night
When no one knows about
Just you and your heart
Crying over your past
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Hadil Diaf
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Soul Watcher 25 July 2015

Nice words, and sad poem: -) As soon as we feel that we are doing something wrong, that means that we are working to inform ourselves. As we know, the first step to fix, is to know the mistake. Good poem, I just wished to see some positive conceptions in it. There's also a typo in the fifth line for the word World Thank you for your poems.

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Hadil Diaf

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Tizi Ouzou, Algeria
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