Monday, March 18, 2013

Dark Streets Black Souls Comments

Rating: 5.0

My silent feet patrol these streets
They seek no help from me.
Expectant clouds, form up like shrouds
They whisper destiny.
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Maggie Munro 31 March 2013

Delighted to read this, Owain. Has a richness and confidence about it, even though the subject is quite dark. Beautifully done x

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Valerie Dohren 26 March 2013

Excellent Owain, love it - going into my favs. Expertly written, impeccable rhyming. A definite 10.

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Hazel Durham 22 March 2013

A very dark poem with brilliant imagery so chilling and deep! Loved it. Inspired write!

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