Dark Souls With Blood Stains Comments

It ironically sounds like the game Dark Souls.

nice poem.... keep it up.

Very unique, an incredible wave of vocabulary with a mixture of emotions, lovely, keep up the good work

Omigosh! This is an incredable poem you've written! It's so depressing but it's so awesome how you combined your feelings and your love of poetry! That is an excellent poem....If you want you can look up my poems and read them.

I've always had a thing for not so calming poems. And this one, well I can feel the power radeating off of it! And so we go, Paul

Wow this is very powerful! You really are a good writer. Keep using emotions I personally think it is what sets the darker side of writing apart from the fluff.

Awesome poem. I love dark poems like this. You are a really good poet -Tess C.

a good flow of verses...you did good work in this...nice

This one is very good. I like the dark feeling you create with your words. This is a poem that can be felt. I have a question though. In the first line, did you mean to say 'died' or 'dyed' as in colored? I can see how both would work, but if you did intend 'died' then I would put a few elipses(...) after the word in order to avoid any more confusion as to meaning. My soul died...dark with blood stains. Write on young bard.

wow....and i thougth the other one was great. lol. fanastic.

I truly loved the imagry in this poem.