Dark Soul Comments

Your sense of right and wrong is enough proof that you are a bright soul not dark, lovely.

Oh man... you touch me on a very deep level with this one.... very deep indeed.

Your poetry is too meaningful to come from someone who is repulsive, you are a blessing to those who read it and can feel your understanding of a subject they also know about, but haven't been able to express like you have. Being hollow can be a good thing, because you can write of anything and everything you want to. It gives you a freedom not everyone can have. You have no boundaries to keep you from going forward in life, and your soul is actually the light of your life, follow it faithfully and you will feel it's freedom. Write from the huge hole - it's actually a well of poetical expression and experience. Thank you for sharing your heart with the world. RoseAnn

There is a tinge of despair here. The hollow inside is not a tragedy. That's when the heart and the soul seek to relate But you think it is the end of all things. no Bring the soul nearer and let the heart be deluged by its light. This poem is powerful in itself, because the heart is trying to express itself. I love it Mohabeer Beeharry

Dark and so very perceptive, enjoyed it.