Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Dark Secret Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness all around me,
I feel you, suffocate,
No one else is around my misery,
Can I give anyone the key to the gate?
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Ocean Myranda
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Ocean Myranda 23 September 2008

Thanks, I just wrote it today (9/23/08) . I'm glad you like it! This and 'Black Rose' are my favorite poems that I've written! Thanks, again!

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Marilyn Lott 23 September 2008

Wow, what an intense poem! So much emotion that comes through. Captivating - a '10! ' Keep writing and sharing with us. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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