Monday, April 6, 2009

Dark Sands Comments

Rating: ★3.0

Dark sand running through my fingers
Like water dripping from the leaves of a palm tree
Smooth and rushing
This dark sand
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Shelby Jasmin Estrada
dark running leaves Oceans beach
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Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

The imagery portrayed is just splendid that depicts the melancholic and alarming feeling of frightfulness of losing something........a beautiful poem....10

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Deva De Silva 16 April 2009

Sandy beaches... plam trees... ocean waves... lovely imagery. In few words so much expressed!

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Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Friday Harbor, WA
Shelby Jasmin Estrada
Shelby Jasmin Estrada
Friday Harbor, WA
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