Friday, June 5, 2009

Dark Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

a dark rose growing from the dark
concrete crevice of
this deserted building
on this dark night
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Danielle Guscott 01 July 2009

Beautiful. I love it.

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Arabian Heart 25 June 2009

A rose that falls or grows A bloom tat taints your essence A rise that call Fight for the nutrients for all And fight the pain until the lights shine for powerful A rose for you for letting me read your wonderful words

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Dragon Thunder 12 June 2009

nice poem great words for a great poet give ya a 10

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Akram Saqib 12 June 2009

dark rose shines when the sun rise great words

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Lady Grace 08 June 2009

a fine poem with many enchanting words..like it..grace

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Catrina Heart 07 June 2009

Such a great imagery you have put here in a short yet lovely piece...10+

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Dark represent no gloom or pain. every flower greet the sun to boom. good write....10

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Rory Hudson 05 June 2009

Good work. I didn't like the repetition in it at first, but it grew on me, and on reflection I think it works.

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