a dark rose growing from the dark
concrete crevice of
this deserted building
on this dark night
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A rose that falls or grows A bloom tat taints your essence A rise that call Fight for the nutrients for all And fight the pain until the lights shine for powerful A rose for you for letting me read your wonderful words
Such a great imagery you have put here in a short yet lovely piece...10+
Dark represent no gloom or pain. every flower greet the sun to boom. good write....10
Good work. I didn't like the repetition in it at first, but it grew on me, and on reflection I think it works.
Beautiful. I love it.