Dark Room Comments

Frozen. Unable to cry As I lose it all in a Dark room Under a moonless Sky I loved that most

walking dazed in the darkness, mind...well, a good expressive write, Sarah...light is always there at the end of the tunnel...HIS light...10

True...but somtimes we get observed in darkness tht we ignore the light tht is ready to brighten our life, , , , thts why we should never lose hope no matter how tough is our life our faith and trust on Allah turn dark nights in to bright days.. overall very nice composition..keep it up....! i liked it

Sometimes life becomes a dark room, a nightmare... but there is always a way out, always a door is lit up...!

very well described and theatrical

a very beautiful composition indeed with deep feelings of loneliness and lost....thanks 10+

A beautiful poem, amazing composition. 10+ for it.

very goodd ; well down and rhytmic

Nice poem it is chosen words has brought fine tempo!

'Lost the light of the flickering candle Nothing around seems easy to handle'well done, thanks for sharing

good poem i like it..........