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Very nice keep it up

Hi Ritika, Very profound philosophical write. Worried looking for something she could not find Flurried she stood with him on his mind Minutes later on the bank of river She exclaimed, It was my mirror. Loved reading this poem. Poem onto Mypoemlist and the poet onto MyFavouritePoets.100+++

Hi Ritika, Life is such an enigma, who can decipher it? Very poignant and pertinent poem..

Loneliness can be a killer, a great poem.

Thus she went whining whirling in happiness To sing a song of love forever instead of loneliness Aback with a rustle, she hustled Turned around roamed about..desire to be happy and to lead a life in reality in peace and joy and love..... thank u for this poem. tony

Thank you so much everyone for your appreciation :)

thank you all for your appreciation :)

Wah kya khub likha...bahut achhe..

Very nice poem Ritz..gud

Beautiful 👍🏻

Awesome lines you have taken to show the face of Real World...

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Awesome 👌👌

Beautifully written 👏

Lovely poem, its like a star is born 😘 such a deep thoughts