Monday, May 5, 2014

Dark Rain... Comments

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The rain started falling today, from up high
within the dark clouds embracing the sky
they swelled like honey dew,
ripe and sweet, something new.
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DEEP DARK SOUL POET
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Amitava Sur 24 June 2014

A nice write up with proper rhythm... liked the poem

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Colleen Courtney 05 May 2014

I'm loving the way you write! Adding you to my list of poet favorites!

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Bill Cantrell 05 May 2014

Good poem my friend, I like the wording as well as the rhyme, If you wish, read my poem ]]Dead Rain

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