Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Dark Poetry - Emo Comments

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In this place,
I no longer think,
Beacuse of you,
Who pushed me off the brink,
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Kieran J1996
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Celiene Watts 17 June 2010

A grim poem, but touching and deep at the same time. Very good use of words Cieran. :) xx

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Vivid Expression. They say the life of a creature is in the blood! Bllod cries out! Innocent blood that is. Rather Have life and life abundant! Well penned. Love: D

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