Thursday, May 20, 2010

Dark Poetry - A Heart Of Poison Comments

Rating: 3.3

Pain...
An inky, black veil,
A veil of eternal sorrow,
This, is what you have done,
...
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Kieran J1996
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Vivid and bold. Loved the intensity of this poem. well done; D

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Cain XXX 18 June 2010

wow. pretty intense poem. liked the poem. loved the last line. :)

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Celiene Watts 17 June 2010

Sad, and a little scary, but is amazing like the rest :) x

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The Lost.. 14 June 2010

pain is a very hard feeling that i felt it alot before... hope u'll come over this very soon. nice poem, i liked it.

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Joanna Hamilton 30 May 2010

this is absolutely beautiful.

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