Tuesday, July 6, 2010

Dark Poetry - A Delusion Comments

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Everyday I die,
Because of a lie,
I delude myself of your love,
But I know that when push comes to shove,
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Kieran J1996
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A good poem, full of expression! Hope she stays! ; D

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 10 July 2010

'Everyday I die, Because of a lie, I delude myself of your love, But I know that when push comes to shove, You'll dropp me on the spot, ' is a great way of showing emotion.... i enjoyed reading this piece..... keep it up! ! ! !

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