Dark Poetic Mind Comments

Love teeters on the brink of the dark and emo...but anyway, this is indeed poetic and dark (which is a good thing, of course) and I enjoyed it. eni da kid

Its amazeing this poem i enjoy it thanks!

great poem, as always

'But I was still romantic for you, ' excellent Uriah!

I had to read this several times before I could start to absorb it. I do see the speaker as a saving, compassionate voice (personality) which is what I often get from your poems.

This disturbing poem at least turns out with a good decision. It is very well-told, Uriah. You set the mood well and the descriptions of the girl leave little to the imagination. When I read the title, I trembled for you, but I decided that this time, your 'dark poetic mind' was more poetic than dark. Thank God. Raynette

Yes, you do sometimes have a dark poetic mind Uriah......but a beautiful one. Sincerely, Mary

Very powerful, and a sort of cruel beauty to this poem. Sad idea behind it....very well written.