Saturday, June 25, 2011

Dark Place Comments

Rating: 4.5

Small and confined
she stays a prisoner to her dark place
Try as she may
she always ends up back at her dark place
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Patti Wilburn Haney
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Minas Harutunian 29 January 2014

very well written. it really expressed what you were/are feeling. you did a great job attracting the reader to your emotions and feelings.

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