Dark Past! ! ! Comments

wow that was a intresting poem.good job

Your heart written words can be heard loud and clear my brother....time and only time can cure what pain the heart and mind contain...I wish you the best my brother and hope that your pains will not return to you. but the big fella works in mysterious ways Peace & Love bro Jon

This is amazing and sad all at the same time- its so good and as i got further in it i wanted to cry for you and for her, this truelly is great. i give you 10 10 10 10 10

wow cj! ! ! u have sooo many amazing talents! ! ur writing always catch me off guard! ! this piece is great! ! ! depressing but it is extremely good