Within the darkness of shadows Vail,
And closer to the skin then hair,
That moment of grand illusion,
complexes the touch of share.
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Haunting, ephemeral images and thoughts, poetically expressed, that tantalise, even ensnare the reader. Very effective use of partial glimpses and devices. Very impressive poem on a very evasive theme.
Surreal... well-selected words well crafted G. t x
I've read this one a few times Geoff...well-crafted...yes! Haunting images, well expressed. 'Look beyond that that is fear', Turn, but move will not go'...........