Friday, March 2, 2007

Dark Of The Night... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Within the darkness of shadows Vail,
And closer to the skin then hair,
That moment of grand illusion,
complexes the touch of share.
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Geoff Warden
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Diane Violet 31 March 2007

I've read this one a few times Geoff...well-crafted...yes! Haunting images, well expressed. 'Look beyond that that is fear', Turn, but move will not go'...........

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Not a member No 4 15 March 2007

Haunting, ephemeral images and thoughts, poetically expressed, that tantalise, even ensnare the reader. Very effective use of partial glimpses and devices. Very impressive poem on a very evasive theme.

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Surreal... well-selected words well crafted G. t x

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Geoff Warden

Geoff Warden

London Ontario Canada
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